NJ Coleman’s "Floating Through Eden" is a mesmerizing journey into a paradise of peace and beauty. The poem’s repetition and ethereal imagery evoke a sense of eternal solace and the revelation of a perfect, unburdened existence.
Your pain will be gone... You will always be the one... You will never be alone... you will never be alone... you will never be alone... you will never be alone... I am astounded by its beauty, Its peacefulness, its providence, And its promise of perfection I am floating, Floating in a paradise no longer lost Revealing all, concealing nothing from thy view How could we not have known? Why were we not shown? How could we have forgotten? I am floating... Floating through Eden Floating in a heaven. But there's no one here.
NJ Coleman is a Chicago-area poet who has been writing poems and songs since their early teens. Now retired, they have rediscovered a deep passion for poetry. Drawing inspiration from nearly everything, NJ crafts verses that explore a wide range of themes. Floating Through Eden was inspired by an article on near-death experiences, reflecting their curiosity about the mysteries of life and beyond.
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