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Neil Coleman's avatar

Wonderfully elusive thoughts which, at first, are seemingly disconnected. Yet they present, to me, a trilogy of a night, and early dawn, of loss. Memories of moments and sounds swooshing in, fading into a wide-awake dawn.

“The way birds carry music” is a fantastic line. A very soulful, solemn poem.

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Daniel DeLucie's avatar

I like the structure of this piece. It moves and it's moving.

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