This is a genius poem, so poignant and expressive. You have captured the essence of the care and caring of a loved one, once lively and now fading while your heart breaks.
One thing if I may: "He only speaks," kind of jumped out of me; rather, "He speaks only" is the correct order.
This is a genius poem, so poignant and expressive. You have captured the essence of the care and caring of a loved one, once lively and now fading while your heart breaks.
One thing if I may: "He only speaks," kind of jumped out of me; rather, "He speaks only" is the correct order.