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Ken LéMarchand's avatar

It was an alright personification of a tornado. It captured the concept that nature doesn't care what we humans think of its chaos.

Feasts and Fables's avatar

Brilliantly observed. Lobe the 'voice' of the 'twister'

Evie Groch's avatar

Loved your poem. It inspired me. Evie Groch